Changing - "Wake the space up" (5) - mah work

Recently, I've got some more comments on my work and most of them point out that mine looks involved. This seems to be one my most usual mistake or, in another way, style. I'll try to make it better next time.
Actually I myself did know from the first image that it might be visually complicated but I let it go. Lazy was I to edited the design and " letting go" is my bad habit.Moreover, I consider its being complication as a common characteristic of most commercial streets . That's why many of mine are often imperfect.lol.

enough said, this is my " TYPO FOR THE STREET " (link )


fashion quotes
current and upcoming fashion events
current trends/seasons



luminous paint shines for nights and create a funky walk line. ( lol, I can rap this sentence)


texts are stretched with perspective effect to create "normal and straight" appearance in eye-view.




and " Thank you" is the simpliest , most courteous and probably styliest thing to say.


(waiting for the result ....)